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    最近闲得来又有些灵感这样,就写一写这个啦。类似小说故事这样,多多支持噢。
     
    START:
    “这个故事就是从那个时候开始~”
              人一生中需要经历不同的阶段不同的人生经验,而在这段时间里,我们可以体验很多。
              就在人生的第三个学业,一班从不认识的学生们就在开学日当天步入了一间为学业而战的战场-高菱中学。在众多学生当中,往往只有那几个才会有那~缘分。
    就是那点点的“缘”,那几位就成了彼此能依靠的好朋友好拍挡。
     
    “哈哈,不知到我们的班级任会不会是个大帅哥呢?是就好啦。”慧珊是当中最花痴的一个噢。
    “嘿,够了吧。那么大个帅哥在你面前就不用再幻想再有人比我更帅了吧。哈哈哈哈。”我最受不了的就是俊杰那无法无边的自恋耶。太憋了吧。
    所以我就多多口插了一句,“从来都没见过像你那么自恋的咧。真是恶心!”他竟然没再出声噢,我心里面暗暗自喜,又是我赢了。
     
    ring~~~
     
    那给人有点恐惧的上课铃声又响了。“慧珊,老师要进班啦,看看他能否如你所说噢”另一个花痴小姐又发言了。她可算是我们班里唯一一个女生和“丑”这个阶段有最强烈的对比噢。丽磬是我们班的”花痴邦“主席噢,她不但是纵多男生的对象,而且噢,还得过小学时候的校花咧。哈哈,超搞笑。
    “好,同学们早。我是陈老师,我会是你们的班级任,多多指教。”
    『什么狗屁嘛,明明就是个老师,还要跟我们多多指教耶。还不如我们来做老师。』我心里暗说着。
     
    看到那还算个帅哥的老师,那班”花痴邦“还不赶快争取老师的第一个印象噢。
     
     “老师好,我是纪宝慈。你可以叫我小慈。”什么啦,这还可以噢??真不明白我竟然可以跟她们做朋友咧。
     “这位纪同学你好,可以先坐下啊。现在我们就来一个个自我介绍,就从这里开始吧。”
    政豪,洁礼,泓晴,慧珊。。。。。。。。。
     “很好,下一个,这位男同学你叫什么名呢?”老师竟然那么快就问到来我这里咧。
      我站起。“我是刘学康。”才那一点点的介绍后我就坐下了。我最讨厌人家叫我的全名了,『刘学,刘学。。。留学』从小就被朋友笑留学。真搞不懂妈妈怎么会用这个名。
     那整班才有那三十多个学生,才那一会就介绍完啦。老师就开始记录学生的资料。
     那整班“花痴邦”就开始了她们的猎男会议,莫名其妙的我也加入了会谈咧。
     “嘿,黄慧珊,你真够厉害耶。这样也可以让你说中噢,陈老师真算个小帅哥噢,他那迷人的眼睛,噢不!顶不顺啦。”
     “哈哈,能有那么帅的老师我开始爱上学了。我恨不得连拜六礼拜也要来上学噢。”
        听到这些让人受不了的,我啊,疙瘩皮起了一层又一层。
    continue...............
     
     

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    RAcHelwrote:
    hey guy... good job... continue on leh... waiting for ur next episode... out already?... gambateh
    6 days ago
    mickeywrote:
    finally!!!
    CLOSING!!!
    Nov. 14
    mickeywrote:
    so in the story i hav tat it name is very bad ah...
    Nov. 14
    Kenny Lokwrote:
    1st name i saw "纪宝慈" =.=
    Nov. 14
    miaowrote:
    your main character name really bad!!!刘学康???omg,but not as bad as ah lok said la...
    not bad the theme,but y i feel that u r writing the stuff in our class geh?
    haha...ok la...if ur writing can be improved,the whole passage not so 'long air' geh wa,sure hao kan hen duo...
    gambateh neh
    Nov. 13
    mickeywrote:
    do i wanna to continue write???i get the feedback is say tat my tis story very bad wo...they say very kolotTT
    should i continue???maybe need to stop it.............
    Nov. 13
    Selin Mei Qiwrote:
    什么时候会有下文啊???
    Nov. 12
    sanwrote:
    哇?你不是抄书的吧?呵呵...
    嗯...蛮不错的主题故事啦...
    追下去看的感觉...呵呵
    等待你的continue...加油哦
    Nov. 12

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